Thursday, 13 June 2019
My Dream House
We have been learning how to design our dream house. My dream house has a pool room, 3 bedrooms, living room and an outside pool. the feature that I love about my house the bedrooms and the pool room and the outside look and the living room
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Hi there Jae, My name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School, or YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteWOW! Is the only word I can use to describe it. Your plan is very thought out and clear after looking at it for a bit.
This reminds me of when for math we had to make our own little house with walls, furniture and we had to make sure all of it was laid out nice and that it fitted.
Next time you could label the rooms because when I first looked at it I didn't see where everything went, but after a bit I saw where everything is.
Would you live in this house if you could?
Kind Regards,
Abby.
Kia Ora!
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My name is Maddiosn, First of all I am from Yaldhurst Model School, and this post looks amazing!
My mouth dropped like a gaping fih when I saw how much detail you had added in to this!
I think that this looks so time consuming and very well thought out, I also liked how you made all of the little furniture yourself and I liked the characters you added in as well!
I think to make this blog post a little better a good thing to do it to try and add in some label your did something like that in the text but it would look cooler if you added in labels instead of text, another thing is to make it a little bigger!
I love making things on google slides and when I look back on some of my old work I did on there I get shocked on how much I have improved do you ever feel the same? I think that everything in here looked very creative and very bright and fun, I noticed a red square on what looked like a wardrobe is that a book, it said " The Love " Is that a book your reading? If so what's it about?
Let Me Know!
-Maddie.
Nga mihi maddiosn for your commenting on my post and you can keep looking on my blog and leaving comments anytime. I usually post every week.
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